Sun Roofs

Burnished canopy, vines of
drainpipes and raingutters
coiled in a tendril embrace.

Light shafts in like a sudden
downpour: the sky rolls back
its sun roof of clouds.


  1. Excellent.
    For me,the best lines are "the sky rolls back/
    its sun roof of clouds."

    Thanks for sharing.

  2. anyone would be foolish to disagree


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