e io coll'arco
- Michelangelo
Back again in the Valley of Elah,
surrounded by this scaffolding of light,
Mediterranean oak and terebinth.
You and I, we have been in single combat
forty days and forty nights, your shadow
looming over penitence like a wrath.
You’ve savaged my dreams, a lion stalking
among the grasses, a black bear tearing
at flesh; and I a ruddy boy, alone.
Now I stand, unarmoured, unadorned, stone
in one fist, conviction in the other.
I watch your face, try to find it in your eyes,
dark furrowed in that contemptuous glare.
There: fear, flickering like a borrowed wick.
It comes to this: rock against blade, marble
against faith, this armoury of heaven
vengefully clenched, a coiled-up serpent tongue.
Rise up then, unquarried colossus, rise:
And I will sling defiance into your
disdain, chisel deep into your brow
the tetragrammaton of my God.
This poem was first published in Poets and Artists magazine (Goss183) - http://poetsandartists.com/2012/01/08/the-2012-collaboration-edition.
ReplyDeletePart of the 2012 Collaboration issue, publisher Didi Menendez paired me with award-winning portrait artist Casey Childs to interpret the theme 'iconic'. Together, we decided to explore the complexity of David and Michelangelo.
Casey's painting, 'Liberating David', and my poem stand independent of each other; but taken together they illuminate several other layers of interpretation.
Short link - http://bit.ly/s4david
I very much enjoyed how you have added several layers to a piece of history with has long only thought to be two dimensional.
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Fantastic! This took me back to the story of David and Goliath and it gave breath to the righteous anger David felt at the Philistine's tauntings in a much less formal way than the scriptures do.
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ReplyDeletenice...def rings of david and goliath and you really brought the story to life sam...very well told...
ReplyDeletei like that you wrote it from a personal perspective...the fear, the seeking it in the eyes...the standing alone against a mighty enemy...whatever the name is...goliath or the challenges of life..great job in building up the tension..
ReplyDeleteWonderful interpretation of the work. I am whisked back to biblical times (and if I may confess...Sunday School lessons!) And thanks so very much for your support...PoetLove! :)
ReplyDeleteIntensely personal and strong in the viewpoint--pure poetry in the language--always a delight to read your work, Sam. Thanks for the helpful process notes as well.
ReplyDeleteLove your interpretation...It is a personal viewpoint. Now I stand, unarmoured, unadorned, stone in one fist, conviction in the other....It gives the words for each of us that are Davids facing our Goliaths.
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