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nice use of verged...border...had to look it up...i like that...blue as the universes ghost, very nice.
the ocean with all its poplution...still blue from a distance...the tie to the universes ghost ..haunting...bkm
Beautiful, tight, vivid poetry!
Short and Succinct...finding dreams for you
Investing the natural world with emotion and soul, and beautifully. The second stanza makes an exceptionally strong finish.
A momentary feeling A glimpse at the compendiumOf a man's sweep Blessed with the ability To catch the changes OneLove--Tiger Windwalker
I like the way how you put in context the ocean and the sky : "Sad ocean, verged against this faded sky..." Beautiful shot
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