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This reminds me of waking up in the middle of night and a dream I can't quite remember. Nice one.
Excellent Sam, it reads beautifully like a whisper in my head.
"Sleep on it" indeed. Perfectly titled.
That last stanza is amazing... and all before so visually acute!
When the truth is discovered in a dream, so astounding as to wake one up. You capture that moment with tender, knowing style.
I need dreams like that!
Those revelations that sometimes seem to suddenly come--startling one of deep sleep. Beautiful.
I woke up in the middle of the night, my heart pounding and I knew it was something important, something I should remember, but maybe something I didn't want to remember. That's what your poem reminded me of. It was vivid and powerful and heartfelt. Very well done. Blessings. http://kickinitwiththekids.wordpress.com/2012/01/30/garden-of-laughs/
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