Physicist and storyteller
Oh my! A gem of a short poem. The second stanza couplet is pointed, powerful, and packs a big concluding punch. I find it brilliant. A wonderful write Sam.
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This takes me back to summer marching band practice. <3
Yes, the heart and mind say, together. xxxj
I am liking your short poems..Emily Dickinson is ine of my favorites, brevity, wit & natural imagery. You are also a master of all three
How beautifully you make the sun alive.
Lovely and concise work here!
made me chant the sailor's words "Red sky at morning..."and this is pulsating indeed!
A beautiful piece, Sam. Great imagery; I'm seeing a red sky and a bright sun moving with rays of light pushing away the red.
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