The Poems of Samuel Peralta
Oh my! A gem of a short poem. The second stanza couplet is pointed, powerful, and packs a big concluding punch. I find it brilliant. A wonderful write Sam.
Thanks for the kind words!Short link - http://bit.luy/s4redsky
This takes me back to summer marching band practice. <3
Yes, the heart and mind say, together. xxxj
I am liking your short poems..Emily Dickinson is ine of my favorites, brevity, wit & natural imagery. You are also a master of all three
How beautifully you make the sun alive.
Lovely and concise work here!
made me chant the sailor's words "Red sky at morning..."and this is pulsating indeed!
A beautiful piece, Sam. Great imagery; I'm seeing a red sky and a bright sun moving with rays of light pushing away the red.
For you I wish that these poems were rubies, borne by my own caravan from Xi'an out of Shaanxi, through Persia, along the northern Silk Road.- S. Peralta, Twelve Stones on a Necklace
Oh my! A gem of a short poem. The second stanza couplet is pointed, powerful, and packs a big concluding punch. I find it brilliant. A wonderful write Sam.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the kind words!
ReplyDeleteShort link - http://bit.luy/s4redsky
This takes me back to summer marching band practice. <3
ReplyDeleteYes, the heart and mind say, together. xxxj
ReplyDeleteI am liking your short poems..Emily Dickinson is ine of my favorites, brevity, wit & natural imagery. You are also a master of all three
ReplyDeleteHow beautifully you make the sun alive.
ReplyDeleteLovely and concise work here!
ReplyDeletemade me chant the sailor's words "Red sky at morning..."
ReplyDeleteand this is pulsating indeed!
A beautiful piece, Sam. Great imagery; I'm seeing a red sky and a bright sun moving with rays of light pushing away the red.
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