Outside, the winter frieze has banished all
except the shadows from the streets. Beneath
it all, a final subway train engraves
a drawn, unhurried course across its tracks.
Its sound reverberates through the grates, an
electron in its shivering orbital.
Here, colder still, in the railway tunnel
of the MRI, the liquid helium
embraces in its coiled magnetic frame.
The shutter trips, and I become a flash,
protons cascade, a corona of light.
Etched in the scanner's screen like the Turin
shroud, a self-portrait. The cranial tumor
a frosted silver, like a crown of thorns.
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ReplyDeleteJust beautiful.
ReplyDeleteAdventurous poem. The cranial tumor is a shock, and with it the poem falls into place.
ReplyDeleteSo real to be a witness to your own mortality and tell it like it is. I wasn't gonna come to your site because I judged you as being egotistical. Now I apologize. I wish you continued acuity of vision in your observations of life. I pray you make it thru to the other side(whatever that is) painting for us a color portrait of what it means to be human.
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Tiger Windwalker
Elegant, elegiac, and exceptionally clean and clear writing. And a fine poem. I have yet to come here and find one that wasn't.
ReplyDeleteoh dang...wonderful write...the tumor at the end stirred some tough emos...nice gut punch...smiles.
ReplyDeleteHelium presents, with great subjective concision and poetic flair, a journey encompassing elements of art, science, history, and mortality.
ReplyDeleteI didn't expect the shift. Great imagery.
ReplyDeleteWith your usual brilliance, you bring us into your world ... then drop us to our knees.
ReplyDeleteAgain, brilliance. The lexicon from whence you draw your words is worth a pirate's booty, and the syntax of your verse is that Raphael's pen. A beautiful piece Sam.
ReplyDeleteWooowww!! What brilliant imagery and fantastic analogy!! I am truly speechless here! I started on the lines of Winter, and found myself in a claustrophic channel... my brain translated into a chromatic display!
ReplyDeleteReally.. a breathtaking one shot!
This is one of my favorites - I love the relationship between a subway tunnel and an MRI - and not just the similarity in the visual, but the cold, lonely feeling that can accompany...
ReplyDeleteExcellent you are so good...the shroud of turin the crown of thorns....Yes!!! vivid and powerful for one with such a cross to bear....bkm
ReplyDeleteWonderful poem.. I liked your words..
ReplyDelete'Its sound reverberates through the grates, an
electron in its shivering orbital.'
a lot... it appeal to the engineer in me.. ;-)
Thanks for sharing..
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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Twitter @VerseEveryDay
Congratulations for this blog.
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Great regards
Juan Cuatrecasas
Bilbao, Spain
Hi Samuel-- I can't tell whether i posted my comment on Ablution-- a perfect title-- on the post-- something happens when I try to click there. But again, it is an absolutely fabulous poem-- everyone should read it and pass it on, in this time in which we are so, for want of a better word, fallen, lost. xxxj
ReplyDeleteWith 'Time Zones' and 'To a Woman in Her Home', this is one of three poems which have been included in the arts and literary journal, The Poetry Tree. My thanks to Renée Sigel, publisher and managing editor, and the staff at The Poetry Tree for allowing me to be a part of their journey.
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