Garden


I stop at Williams
Cafe, victim of
a conspiracy
of hunger and rain.

In the line ahead
of me, a couple
hover, fourth in line
to place their order.

Blonde hair cascades like
dawning over her
sunprint dress – a rich
tapestry of light,

Gauguin’s dream,
a collage of leaves
and streams, and a frail,
pastel innocence.

He circles his arm
all around her waist;
and as he does so,
the emerald snake

that is the tattooed
sleeve on his right arm –
his ring and middle
finger the forked tongue

grazing serpentine
her sheering fabric –
slithers into Paradise,
tightens its embrace.


13 comments:

  1. Short link - http://bit.ly/s4garden

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  2. For me, poetry is all about the visual I get as I'm reading and with your words Sam, I was standing right there in that 'Graden' immediately. Love this one.

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  3. The ending of this poem is powerful; it turns the mundane to extraordinary.

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  4. Yes, this is a great.
    I always envision things like this when I watch people around me.

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  5. A provocative poem

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  6. beautiful garden piece.
    enjoyed the imagery.


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  7. "slithers into Paradise"...vivid.

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  8. This piece creates a very strong and vivid image of the couple standing in line. Enjoyed it!

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  9. Ooooh, this one took me by surprise as the snake slowly made its way.....and slithered into Paradise. A poet's eye!

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  10. Gosh, what an excellent evocation of Eve and the serpent in paradise! Excellent poetry.

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  11. Great visuals on this one! I just really see it happening!

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  12. You have the gift of poetic description—this is so well done! Thank you!

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  13. Pure art. A painting of a poem. How beautiful!

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