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Thanks, this is one of those poems that I fumbled with in draft for ages, that suddenly came together in one moment of clarity.
Beautiful piece, my friend.
Simply breathtaking. I have often fumbled and struggled... then the light. I love this result. Wish I'd written it. :)
Thanks, this bodes well for the upcoming year, I should keep writing!
I love this piece for its subtle twist of fate that can turn our delicate moments on a whim. How does one recapture the past when time insists on a new path or song. This poem rings of so many lost moments lying hidden in ones psyche. I also feel the poem illustrates your unique perspective & gifts. Bravo!harmony
This is haunting and beautiful.
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A delicate beauty.
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