Drenched

Drenched in sunlight,
like water. When you move,
your long dress clings to you,
like my eyes.
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6 comments:

  1. So few words sooooo many possibilities.

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  2. "drenched in sunlight like water..." so beautiful!

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  3. Anonymous11:02:00 AM

    Yes! The eyes, when free will consume the landscape :)

    38harmony

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  4. A time when "less" was "more", great.

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  5. Very nice, sets a very beautiful tone in a few words. Would love to have your views upon my work as well when you have some time. I just posted "Soul Journey" with one of my illustrations. =) Fascinating connections of poets' thoughts.

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