Listening In


Was it an elbow or a knee, we wonder.
There! She's kicked again! Turning
in her sleep, spelling out her dreams,
in morse, inside you.
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5 comments:

  1. Very sweet and succinct, and as a relatively new father, I know exactly what you mean :)

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  2. A wonderful little piece. Thanks for letting us "listen in" to your own listening. "spelling out her dreams,
    in morse" is a wonderful line, BTW.

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  3. It is awesome is in the delivery room, looking at the heart monitor tracking two beats, mother's and baby's, one inside the other. It is absolutely amazing.

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  4. A small, perfect miracle

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  5. Describes a miraculous moment with gentleness and wonder. Makes me remember my own.

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