Physicist and storyteller
Wow. Very nicely done. I had to look up the word "spume," but I love the image of "a bridge between the uncertain truce / of spume and sky."Bravo.
Gorgeous, as always. I'd look at the two "splinters" and maybe change one of them?
Thanks for catching that! Editing oversight, must have been a late night. On second thought, it always is a late night.
Thank you for words of color, action & passion for forms inevitable changes.38harmony
Woah. Amazing words
An image captured and preserved forever. Difficult to attain, well done!
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