Physicist and storyteller
you wrote water-stanzas: very beautiful... like waves of thoughts to be remembered and absorbed
Beautifully written. I can envision everything so clearly. Your poetic visions are astounding.
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Luscious imagery! Wow. The only thing unclear to me is what the "its" refers to in the fourth stanza. The water? The summer? But other than that, just wow.
I love pigeons and the colour blue. I love to mediate by imagining myself swishing around in clear blue skies, rippling rivers and wispy winds. You now might know, just how much I love poem!
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