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mmm, sweet visual here, warm and welcoming. A grand full stop.
Beautiful moment seized in time. Very nice!-Alex
Thank you comma everyone comma for the kind words full stop Short link - http://bit.ly/s4punctual
nice...not just a comma but a period that maybe leads to an elipses...like that playful punctuation embedded in an already cool scene
whoa! fabulous, playful: punctual/punctuation. You have it going on, Sam-- and needn't fret! xxxxj
Punctually perfect... "...life hyphenates in a kiss, slows to a grand full stop." Creative, clever!
Wonderful how you used puncuation as description and punctuation. Lovely poem.
Ok, I did not understand... "Spanish exclamation point."(As I am from India - can not work out the idiosyncrasies of the word play) but then the verse is so beautiful... But then you, I do understand your next lines... which are so perfect.."For a moment, life hyphenates in a kiss, slows to a grand full stop."I hope it does not.. Lovely write up..Thanks for sharing...Shashiॐ नमः शिवाय Om Namah Shivayahttp://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/11/whispers-tears-in-rain.html
Great play on words and structure, wonderful verse.
I thought this just wonderful, the play, the moment...awesome!
No hesitations to call this extraordinary play on words and a stunning poem. Always a pleasure to read your work, Sam. I loved this.
simply deep and inspiring.
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