Riddles with Fruits


1
Naranjita, I strip away your
navel-blush veneer of zest and peel;
your pithy heart falls apart,
yields to me a citrus kiss.

2
Sunday afternoon's best savoured
like a ripened fruit, halved, scored,
turned inside-out into an exquisite,
aromatic sun.

3
Unswallowed, it catches halfway down
his throat, pomaceous core,
like a capybara dissolving
in the serpent's insidious maw.

4
Bear grenadine from Solomon's garden,
arils pressed, fermented into wine,
and cupped in goblets sweet
like my lover's breasts.

5
Sliced along its latitudes, this
flightless world ellipses into
translucent green, sunbursts from its
center into seed.

6
Do I dare to taste your sweetness,
singing each to each, afar,
only to find your heart`s core
clenched and clingstone hard?

7
Baskets full from an afternoon
of picking, we sat by the wild bushes
and, by the handful, fed each other
bursts of syrupy sky.

8
Hot as chili, sour like lime,
fish sauce salty, sugarpalm sweet,
refreshing as mak hoong -
love's Thai salad of contradiction.

9
Night falls, your soul's desert
blooms in white. Blossoms of fruit,
pulp of arid salvation, blood-red and
crowned with thorns.


7 comments:

  1. as always your thoughts are deeply appreciated. Maw, unswallowed, aromatic sun, these definitely leave an impression for me after I've read the poem. Looking forward to the rest

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  2. You leave a thirst and hunger like no other. Fruits, simply divine. Simply divine.

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  3. I came up with the idea of writing a poem in which each of the verses is also a riddle, and the reader is invited to guess the fruit referred to.

    For those with an educational leaning, I call this technique "unnamed metaphor".

    Each verse was inspired by a friend on Twitter, who direct-messaged me a fruit. I'll list them all down sometime soon, but for example, Ellen Hopkins provided the inspiration for verse 5.

    I wrote the verse around the fruit, streamed it when done, and other friends not in the know tried to guess the fruit.

    Someone's asked if I would post the answers. Well, it's more fun if I don't, so I won't - at least not for a while.

    I'll oblige with the (easy) first verse, though: "Naranjita" is about "orange".

    Short link - http://bit.ly/s4riddlefruit

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  4. Oh, how fun! Okay, I'll try to guess...
    2-lemon
    3-apple
    4-pomegranate
    5-kiwi
    6-peach
    7-blueberries
    8-papaya
    9-hard one...desert fruit, some kind of edible cactus?
    (now I really want fruit!)

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  5. what a delicious idea. I'm sure there's a kiwi, dragonfruit, peaches, and possibly blueberries. Perhaps a grapefruit?

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  6. Beautiful--I truly adore reading and "feeling" your poetry. Thanks for sharing!

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For you I wish that these poems were rubies, borne by my own caravan from Xi'an out of Shaanxi, through Persia, along the northern Silk Road.

- S. Peralta, Twelve Stones on a Necklace

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